This layout is a little too loose, Quincee. You need to establish a focal point and ten move the eye around. Also your body copy should all be the same size, font, and leading. Some of it looks as though it was stretched.
Your graphics may be a little too low opacity. They are easy to miss. Rework this a bit and let's see what you come up with.
This layout is a little too loose, Quincee. You need to establish a focal point and ten move the eye around. Also your body copy should all be the same size, font, and leading. Some of it looks as though it was stretched.
ReplyDeleteYour graphics may be a little too low opacity. They are easy to miss. Rework this a bit and let's see what you come up with.